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Hadden gets a surprise evaluation
The bowl slipped from his hand, raising a small cloud of flour into the air. The egg shell cracked in his grip, egg white dripping onto the counter.
He took a sponge cloth to clean the mess, but had to stop halfway as a familiar smell made him curse under his breath: the butter had melted completely.
This was all wrong.
A half hour later, Hadden was chewing on a spongy, flavourless pancake.
Well, it was an improvement, on some level. At least this time he had managed to make them edible....